Monday, September 19, 2011

A Fail Experiment in Short Fiction

"You're full."
"Huh?"
"You're full, aren't you?"

I looked down at the untouched second half of my sandwich.

"No." I scoffed.

The thought of eating another bite made me queasy. The thought of her still being right after six years made me queasy.

"Look!" I said, laughing. "I'm a different person!"

I bit it.

***

Afterword by TKS

Does one false statement make the entire line of thought fiction?

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